This summer was special for me, and it took about two and half mouth to make this summer wonderful. The first thing is to go back to China. That can make me crazy because it needs to take airplane. The most important thing is that I can meet my grandparents.
I got up at six o'clock, when I was sober, everything changed in my eye. I only remember that I got a fly in Dallas yesterday. It took me about 14 hours that the normal person don't believe it. I could see my mess room, the home of China. After I used my surprised eye to look around, I saw my mother went into my room. She said that I slept about 20 hours on the way back to ShenZhen, I thought I was so tied in airplane.
"I got a plan list for today", I said, when I gave this wouderful list to my mom, she thought that was so terrible. On the list, I wrote about nine and ten things: First is meet with my friends. Second is go watch movie together. third is go to eat lunch... She said :"It is your first day in China this summer, so we should going to see your grandparents first." When I heard that good news, I was so happy and I can not wait to see my grandparents. Last year, I only see them twice, so they must be miss me. After we went there, they talked lots of things about me. In that moment I felt so happy.
Beautiful day come from the next. My friend YiFan and Jerry chatted to me. They said welcome back to Shenzhen, and let me go to the Jerry's house. After that I came to the Jerry's house, it has seem changed a lot. I think they are my best friends forever because they help me to finished my plan on the list this summer. I will never forget that the soccer match, I will never forget that the chessboard game, and I will never forget every moment with both of you in this summer vacation!
I got up at six o'clock, when I was sober, everything changed in my eye. I only remember that I got a fly in Dallas yesterday. It took me about 14 hours that the normal person don't believe it. I could see my mess room, the home of China. After I used my surprised eye to look around, I saw my mother went into my room. She said that I slept about 20 hours on the way back to ShenZhen, I thought I was so tied in airplane.
"I got a plan list for today", I said, when I gave this wouderful list to my mom, she thought that was so terrible. On the list, I wrote about nine and ten things: First is meet with my friends. Second is go watch movie together. third is go to eat lunch... She said :"It is your first day in China this summer, so we should going to see your grandparents first." When I heard that good news, I was so happy and I can not wait to see my grandparents. Last year, I only see them twice, so they must be miss me. After we went there, they talked lots of things about me. In that moment I felt so happy.
Beautiful day come from the next. My friend YiFan and Jerry chatted to me. They said welcome back to Shenzhen, and let me go to the Jerry's house. After that I came to the Jerry's house, it has seem changed a lot. I think they are my best friends forever because they help me to finished my plan on the list this summer. I will never forget that the soccer match, I will never forget that the chessboard game, and I will never forget every moment with both of you in this summer vacation!
I bet it's so nice to spend time at home! Wow! You are so lucky that you were able to sleep for so many hours. Next week, you can fix this and earn more points for this blog post. 14/20
ReplyDeleteThis summer was special for me and it was special for everyone. It took about two and half mouths to make this summer wonderful. The first thing I did was go back to China. That made me crazy because it required to take an airplane. The most important thing is that I got to meet my grandparents.
ReplyDeleteI got up at six o'clock. When I was finally awake, everything changed in my eyes. I only remember that I got to fly to Dallas. It took me 14 hours to adjust. I could see my messy room, at my home in China. After I used my surprised eyes to look around, I saw my mother in my room. She said that I had slept about 20 hours on the way back to ShenZhen. I was so tied in the airplane.
"I got a plan list for today," I said, when I gave her my wouderful list. She thought that it was so terrible. On the list, I wrote about nine or ten things: first was meet with my friends; second was go watch movies together; third was go eat lunch... She said :"It is your first day off China in this summer, so we are going to see your grandparents first." When I heard that good news, I was so happy and I could not wait to see my grandparents. Last year, I only see them twice, so they must have missed me. After we went there, they talked about lots of things. In that moment, I felt so happy.
A beautiful day came next. My friend YiFan and Jerry chatted with me. They said welcomed me back to Shenzhen and let invited me to Jerry's house. After that, I went to the Jerry's house; it had changed a lot. I think they will be my best friends forever because they helped me to finish my plan on the list this summer. I will never forget a soccer match we played; I will never forget the chessboard game; and I will never forget every moment with all of us on this summer vacation!
Nice revision! New grade 16/20
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